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Filler words vs filter wordsFiller words aren’t filter words.

One letter apart, and writers mix them up all the time. Filter words put a narrator between the reader and the scene. Filler words just take up room. Here’s the difference, and how Falcontext finds both.

The short version

Filter wordsFiller words
What they areVerbs of seeing, feeling and knowing: felt, saw, heard, noticed, realised, knewWords that add little or nothing: just, really, very, actually, basically, quite
The problemThey put the narrator between the reader and the sceneThey pad a sentence and soften what it says
The fixCut the filter, keep what’s perceivedCut them, or say it stronger
Falcontext’s checkFilter words (free)Adverbs (free) and Your crutch words (Pro)

Filter words, in one example

BeforeShe heard the door creak open and felt a draught on her neck.
AfterThe door creaked open. A draught touched her neck.

The filter is the narrator saying “she noticed”. Take it out and the reader notices instead. More on filter words.

Filler words, in one example

BeforeIt was just really late, and she was very, very tired. Actually, it was basically over.
AfterIt was late, and she was exhausted. It was over.

Nothing was lost. The sentence got shorter and, if anything, stronger.

How Falcontext finds filler words

Not with one check, but two:

  • Adverbs (free) flags the -ly fillers: really, actually, basically, simply, literally.
  • Your crutch words (Pro) flags just, very, quite, rather, really and more. But only once you use one at least twice as often as published fiction, and at least five times.

So one “just” is never flagged. A “just” on every page is.

Falcontext’s Edit tab beside Perch’s writing pad: the Your crutch words check open, finding “just” seven times, “very” six times and “really” five times in five short paragraphs, marked in the text.

Should you cut every one?

No. In dialogue, people talk in fillers, and both checks leave dialogue alone.

And in narration, a “just” can carry a voice. The point is to notice them. What you do with them is up to you.

Guidelines, not rules. Your narrator can say “just” too. Just not forty times.

Filter words have a check of their own in the fourth pass of the self-editing guide, words, next to adverbs and clichés.

Filler or filter: which one sneaks into your drafts?

Questions about filler words.

What’s the difference between filler words and filter words?

Filter words are verbs of seeing, feeling and knowing (felt, saw, heard, realised) that put a narrator between the reader and the scene. Filler words (just, really, very, actually) add little or nothing to a sentence. Different words, different fixes.

Does Falcontext have a filler word checker?

Two checks find them. Adverbs, free, flags the -ly ones: really, actually, basically, simply, literally. Your crutch words, in Pro, flags just, very, quite, rather and others once you use them at least twice as often as published fiction.

Is “just” a filler word?

Often, yes: “She just wanted to go home” works without it. But published novels use “just” plenty, which is why Falcontext only flags it when you use it far more than they do.

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